Please Rate This Review: Singularity 2nd Opinion

[RandomRob]

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It doesn't waste time with exposition and cut-scenes, it just heads for the climax and pushes ahead in gonzo fashion.

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It doesn't waste time with exposition and cut-scenes, it just heads for it's climax in gonzo fashion.

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I found Singularity a dark, tightly put-together and self-consistent in its retro-futuristic detail that didn't waste anything—especially my time. I'd classify it as a short and dirty FPS gem of 2010.

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I found Singularity dark, tightly put-together and self-consistent in its retro-futuristic detail. It didn't waste anything—especially my time. I'd classify it as a short and dirty FPS gem of 2010.