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Re: New review posted: Full Spectrum Warrior
Brother, the review is absolutely excellent but you could do with a little more proof-reading. Finding sentences like "when the enemies' locations and reactions are so rigidly scripted, it can sometimes made me feel like I was playing a game of chess" (there was at least another one like this) is annoying. Also, when you use a dash, leave a space before and after it unless you're using words like machine-gun or match-maker. For example, say "I believe it's true - yet, I also think..." and not "I believe it's true-yet I also think..." Spaceless dashes are reserved for joining words, not separating sentences.
Sorry to sound so pedantic. I insist that the review was superb - it would just be so much more pleasant (and it would look better for GameCritics) without these little unnerving details.
Congratulations on everything else, a top-review.
Last edited by Avptallarita; 09-05-2004 at 08:07 PM.
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