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Old 10-27-2012, 04:49 AM   #7
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Re: Rate This Review: The Last Story

The 'now' and 'see's aren't gamebreakers by any means, just thought I'd mention them. They are redundant, though, and it is a review, not a chat with a friend.

As Rob says, you seem to have a deep understanding of the mechanics etc, and are able to write intelligently about them, so from here on in it should be about finding your style and, in the context of this review at least, a more balanced structure that works.
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