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Old 07-16-2012, 02:26 PM   #2
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Re: Rate This Review: Soul Calibur V

Whoops, didn't see this till now.

Are all your reviews done in a different style?

This one - sorry to be harsh, but I don't think the first para quite works, the description is a bit lacking in energy and you're not setting it up well for the punchline because the reader isn't fooled!

The rest of it doesn't tell me much about fighting games, it assumes I have that knowledge to some degree. More detail needed about the actual game, I think. And you don't need to go for something too fancy for this game, just a normal review might work better....

Also, do not open a para with 'So...'
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