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Old 06-15-2012, 12:21 PM   #2
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Re: Please Rate My Review: Spider-Man: Shattered Dimensions

Hi Copper

This isn't a bad review at all, in some senses, but....the first three paragraphs are out of place, and to me, irrelevant. Not to be harsh, but who cares about the movies etc?

I would start the review with paragraph 4, and then use three more paragraphs to describe the differences in style and gameplay of the different universes instead, wrapping up with a few more words about the final boss or whatever the conclusion of the game is.

No need to headline the final paragraph as 'Personal Feelings' either. All reviews are personal feelings after all.

Good stuff otherwise. I'd just like to hear more about the actual game than where it came from.
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