I don't suppose while I edit it, people would also mind rating it? *laughs*
Thanks for the thoughts Li-Ion.
Is there a particular reason why you mention not using "you"? While newspapers shy away from the word, isn't it more how online reviews tend to go? Correct me if I'm wrong, but in general I tend to feel like plenty of review sites and reviewers use the word, so I'm baffled as to what your reasoning behind it is.
If it's something I've never thought of I'd love to hear it!
The other two points I'll work on to make them clearer in the article