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Jaradcel · 03-04-2012, 12:01 AM

I felt like this wasn't so much a review as it was a rambling blog post to be honest.

There are good reviews that don't "look" like a review - See for instance Rock Paper Shotgun's impressions on Syndicate's single player - but this felt like it was just a stream-of-consciousness article.

That's not to say what you've written is *BAD*, but it certainly could do with a lot more tightening up in terms of word length and grammatical usage to get your points across.

03-04-2012, 12:01 AM	#3
Jaradcel New Poster Join Date: Jan 2012 Posts: 16 Rep Power: 0	Re: Sonic the Hedgehog, or How I Learned to Stop Worrying and Love my Mortality I felt like this wasn't so much a review as it was a rambling blog post to be honest. There are good reviews that don't "look" like a review - See for instance Rock Paper Shotgun's impressions on Syndicate's single player - but this felt like it was just a stream-of-consciousness article. That's not to say what you've written is BAD, but it certainly could do with a lot more tightening up in terms of word length and grammatical usage to get your points across.