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Old 02-27-2012, 07:27 PM   #2
Virgil012
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Re: Rate this Review - Jagged Alliance: Back in Action

I like your review. It gave me a good feel of the game.

However, I feel it needs a little tidying up. A couple of paragraphs start talking about one thing, and then go onto another topic, making the read a bit jarring.

For example, the fourth paragraph starts out talking about the switch to real-time combat upon encountering enemies or doing an objective. Then, the topic switches to graphics, talking about enemy skins and humorous details.

If you separate the topics by paragraphs, it would make the ideas much more clearer.

Just my two cents. Hope it helps.
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