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Old 01-23-2012, 06:38 AM   #4
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Re: Please rate this review: Rayman Origins

Just bought Rayman Origins myself and find it utterly charming.

Nice review. However: some of your sentences are too long and unwieldy for my liking. Especially:
Originally Posted by KIERON View Post
Long ago in the mists of time where rabbits and Rayman didnít co-exist, and revolve around mini games on the Kinect, and the Wii, it was an interesting and challenging game on the Playstation 1.
, which I find not the best possible start and
The game starts from very easy to foaming from the mouth from sheer frustration, and you will die, you will die a lot, and after an unknown amount of deaths a message will pop up and ask you if you want to stay or leave, and no matter how many times I would choose the stay option it would continuously pop up regardless, which I found both patronizing and frustrating.
which is just way tooooooo long in my opinion.
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