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Old 11-12-2011, 09:34 AM   #3
frogofdeath
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Re: Please Rate this Review: Ico (HD)

I agree with GameReviewer122. The story review seems to outweigh the gameplay review. Review of the story is important, but tie in the gameplay, both pros and cons, as you describe the story.

Also, don't tell us "Conclusion". Integrate your closing paragraph as part of your overall writing. The reader will pick up on the fact that you are offering your final opinion of the game.
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