[Pedro]

The tone of the review is a little 'chatty' rather than detached, but apart from that I thought it was a really good review. The main problem, as Li-Ion mentions, is that it really is far too long.

I think it needs cuts rather than compression, as it is already rather dense. I would cut the whole block climbing and how difficult it is to one paragraph. Maybe one line about the irritating controls.

Don't get me wrong; it's a good review. It actually has me torn about getting this game. But the length really needs pruning.