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Old 08-01-2011, 12:54 PM   #2
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Re: Please Rate This Review: Catherine

Review is much too long in my opionion. Try to keep it brief and to the point. Also, try not to use 'you', which imposes something on the reader and quite some readers are not big fans of having something imposed upon
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