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Old 07-12-2011, 08:58 PM   #9
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Re: Please Rate This Review: Portal 2 Third Opinion

Originally Posted by SparkyClarkson View Post
Great. Double-check the spelling (I think you have "fair" where you meant "fare" and a few other minor things) and it should be ready to go.
After looking over the review, I've fixed two things: I corrected the "fair" problem, and I also switched "their" to his/her in the third paragraph. I was unable to spot anything else.

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