[Macstorm]

I've made those changes. Thank you for your comments. Yup, I am FinalMacstorm on Twitter. I'm not really new to review writing, just new to writing about games that aren't RPGs.

I would really appreciate any comments, as I've never been much of a writer, but am making an effort to improve by branching out and trying different styles. Also, while I'm used to using the full scale for scoring, I'm used to a 5 point scale, so I want to make sure my score matchs my text.

Thanks for the feedback so far Richard.