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Old 06-21-2011, 09:06 PM   #6
frogofdeath
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Re: Please Rate this Review: Socom 4

Don't sell yourself short, professional or not, your writing is actually quite well put together. It really just comes down to making the piece a review and not just an informational piece.

Also, don't rid yourself completely of fragments. When used correctly, they add to the writing. Just be careful of using them too much.

Keep at it.
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