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Old 06-19-2011, 10:43 AM   #7
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Re: Please Rate This Review: Knights Contract

Hey Pedro, I appreciate the kind and respectful advice. I reviewed your and frogofdeath's feedback, and I think I see what you mean about the "mess" line. I moved it to the second paragraph, leaving the introduction with praise for the game's unique idea. I think this creates a less abrupt juxtaposition between praising and bashing.

As for progressing through the world, I'll add a sentence or two to the level design paragraph about that. Good call!

Originally Posted by Pedro View Post

Nice reviews so far. It's very apparent that you have the skill to succeed at this, so best of luck!
That means a lot Pedro, thanks
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