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Old 06-19-2011, 09:43 AM   #7
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Re: Please Rate This Review: Knights Contract

Hey Pedro, I appreciate the kind and respectful advice. I reviewed your and frogofdeath's feedback, and I think I see what you mean about the "mess" line. I moved it to the second paragraph, leaving the introduction with praise for the game's unique idea. I think this creates a less abrupt juxtaposition between praising and bashing.

As for progressing through the world, I'll add a sentence or two to the level design paragraph about that. Good call!


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Nice reviews so far. It's very apparent that you have the skill to succeed at this, so best of luck!
That means a lot Pedro, thanks
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