View Single Post
Old 06-16-2011, 07:40 PM   #8
SparkyClarkson
Moderator
 
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: Waltham
Posts: 46
Rep Power: 5 SparkyClarkson is an unknown quantity at this point
Re: Please Rate This Review: Monster Tale Second Opinion

The "low" goes on a bit too long now. Those notes should be quick and punchy, which you can afford to do now that you've put more detail in the body. Also, I'm not a fan of asking a question at the end of the first paragraph. You've got an answer, so give it. Fix those and you've got a green light from me.
SparkyClarkson is offline