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Old 06-16-2011, 07:39 PM   #13
Eric Bowman
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Re: Please Rate this Review: Mass Effect 2: Arrival DLC Second Opinion

Finally got back to this review, addressed many of the criticisms provided, removed all the "you"s, better spaced paragraphs, improved presentation, made it less of a rant. I'd appreciate any comments.
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