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Old 06-13-2011, 12:34 AM   #5
Richard Naik
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Re: Please Rate This Review: Monster Tale Second Opinion

Hey Odo, I'm digging this, but you're leaning a little too heavily on the Metroid comparison in the 4th paragraph. Try scaling that back and talking some more about how Ellie/Chomp's abilities didn't provide "interesting gameplay choices" instead of describing how Metroid worked.

Also, address your "low" point a little bit in the body. That sounds like it was a major headache and not just a moment of annoyance, so I'd like to see a little more about it.
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