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Old 05-25-2011, 12:18 PM   #2
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Re: Rate this review for: Crysis 2.

Howdy kurtmon,

I think you cover all the main points of interest in the game - nano suit, need for strategy, multiplayer etc.

However it's a little difficult to pick all those points out in the review. Perhaps you could be a bit more structured (break it out into smaller paragraphs, esp the big one in the middle) and adopt a more formal tone - less of the 'Man, it's great!' type stuff ;-)

It sounds a little too much like someone discussing the game with his buddies right now. Whereas most of the content is there, it needs to be reworked in a major way, I think.

Also, use spellcheck!
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