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Richard Naik · 04-11-2011, 01:30 PM

Hey Rob:

It's very short (387 words) and hard to read in its current form. Make it a little easier on the eyes and maybe beef it up in some places and re-submit it. Remember-paragraphs are your friend

04-11-2011, 01:30 PM	#2
Richard Naik Lt. Cmdr. PopAndFresh Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 185 Rep Power: 5	Re: Please Rate This Review: Chime Super Deluxe Hey Rob: It's very short (387 words) and hard to read in its current form. Make it a little easier on the eyes and maybe beef it up in some places and re-submit it. Remember-paragraphs are your friend