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Old 04-11-2011, 01:30 PM   #2
Richard Naik
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Re: Please Rate This Review: Chime Super Deluxe

Hey Rob:

It's very short (387 words) and hard to read in its current form. Make it a little easier on the eyes and maybe beef it up in some places and re-submit it. Remember-paragraphs are your friend
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