Re: Please Rate this Review: Fight Night Champion
Hey Fidgety, a couple of notes:
-Don't begin sentences with "But". Use "However" or something else.
-You've got some spelling mistakes in there, like "payed" in the first paragraph which should be "paid".
-frog is right about the "two purposes" point-the second purpose is not clear.
-I know it's a minor thing, but use italics when using a game's title, not bolding.
I think this has some potential, but run through it a few more times and try to smooth it out. Thanks!