[Wiggly Squid]

Very well written. I only want to double check and make sure I'm taking away the message that you are intending for the reader to get:

My impression is that the game could be an abstract art film, watched and not played, and you would get just as much out of it.

Just out of curiosity, Flower has a narrative? I mean, there is an actual storyline? I wouldn't have guessed that if that is the case.