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Old 07-09-2010, 08:01 PM   #6
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Re: Please Rate this Article: Examining Choice in Dragon Age: Origins

Well, you don't have to take my advice on the particular structure, but the one you have right now definitely won't do. Another way to approach it would be to deal with decisions that are similar in some way. For instance, you could talk about the satisfying decisions, and then in a different section talk about the unsatisfying ones, and then in the final section pull it all together. Right now you're just meandering. Remember, good organization helps you to write and it helps us to read.
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