this review makes the classic mistake of assuming the reader knows about the game already and is full of statements that beg the question.
the most glaring one being 'what is the game about'? a short paragraph explaining how someone plays the game (what is a 'music game'?) would have helped.
good point on inappropriate lyrics though.
but watch out for loaded words:
how does a drummer play notes 'realistically'? what is a more 'realistic' tour? what is a proper vocalist? etc