[David Stone]

Well, it's definitely a start. A few things:

1) Please read my grammar blog post. I know it sounds picky, but bad grammar hurt the voice of the review.

2) Because the site is meant for readers of all ages, you don't need the profanity in the sewer's description.

3) Elaborate, please. You glaze over a lot of your points, but don't go into full depth.

Check out the format for other reviews, and try to follow that outline. You've got clear opinions; they just need to be expressed as clearly.