It ain't perfect, but it never is.
I'm sure that you'll take what we've talked about here for the next review. I definitely give my green light, and can't wait to see what you write next.
By the by, if I can address anyone else who reads these comments other than the author: The level of reader-submitted reviews that I've read is really amazing. I'm so happy to see the level of care that readers have with their thoughts. If I ever speak up, I want to make sure that people know it's with the best of intentions and constructive criticism. I know it's hard to convey this with text alone.
Please keep 'em coming!