Please don't misunderstand me, Leizerbeam. I really love what you're saying. I just wanted to give some advice on perhaps a clearer way to say it. Your reviews are very well thought out, and generally well written.
To be honest, I used to have that problem myself - separating my thoughts into clear, related ideas with nothing dangling or changing. I guess I saw some of the old habits I had and wanted to help you pull out of it in less time than it took me.