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Old 01-20-2009, 09:10 AM   #2
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Re: Osu! Tatakae! Ouendan! Review - Please Rate This Review

Great review overall, Leizerbeam. Green light from me, but I have a few suggestions.

I like the set-up and the overall message you're delivering, but I'm finding it a bit hard to read at times, with a few run-on sentences. You don't have to say "in my view" because the review is, after all, *your* view. I might also make a passing reference to Elite Beat Agents, since that's what Ouendan turned into when it came over here. Finally, it needs a score.
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