[Tera Kirk]

Excellent work, Izzardius.

I first read the review after your rewrite, and what you said about lightseeds made sense to me. I haven't played the game.

As Brad said, the ending feels sudden. (Endings are a pain). I thought your comments about what it means to die in video games were the strongest part of this piece...maybe if you brought them into the ending somehow, like you did with Elkia's strengths and weaknesses.

You're 95% of the way there.