I have to agree with Jason on this one...
I do love the humour and personality you add in though, its much better than a dry recitation of the games points. However, I don't really get a sense of the game much. I've never played the CM series, I've played the Premier Manager series (up to 3) and Soccer (by Wizard Games). I think the most current one I tried was a FIFA Manager by EA, which stank to high heaven. Do you have sponsors to deal with or with players salaries, does their attitude effect contratcs? How easy is training?
I'd like to get a feel for how the game plays is what I would like to see, but keep that personality in your writing.
