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Old 11-14-2008, 03:28 PM   #10
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Re: Star Wars: The force Unleashed-Please rate this review

OK-tried to alter the tone a little bit more to make more formal (removed all instances of "friggin"), attempted to elaborate on a few things, and changed a sentences/paragraphs around to try and make it flow a little better.

Regardless of whether this gets published or not, I sincerely appreciate all the feedback. Thanks guys.
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