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Izzardius · 11-14-2008, 02:28 PM

OK-tried to alter the tone a little bit more to make more formal (removed all instances of "friggin"), attempted to elaborate on a few things, and changed a sentences/paragraphs around to try and make it flow a little better.

Regardless of whether this gets published or not, I sincerely appreciate all the feedback. Thanks guys.

11-14-2008, 02:28 PM	#10
Izzardius New Poster Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 29 Rep Power: 5	Re: Star Wars: The force Unleashed-Please rate this review OK-tried to alter the tone a little bit more to make more formal (removed all instances of "friggin"), attempted to elaborate on a few things, and changed a sentences/paragraphs around to try and make it flow a little better. Regardless of whether this gets published or not, I sincerely appreciate all the feedback. Thanks guys.