Re: Star Wars: The force Unleashed-Please rate this review
Brad, perhaps a general description of the game premise/story in between the first and second paragraphs would address your concerns? Otherwise, could you be more specific about what other criticism you might be looking for as a reader?
As for the tone, I agree with Bracken in a earlier post that the review has character and it doesn't feel over the top of anything like that.
I do have two additional edits. Please edit the use of the the second person (ie you) and take out this line in the final sentence:
"although I'm glad I rented it as opposed to buying it"
Perhaps taking out the second person would tone down the informalness as well.