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Old 10-15-2008, 12:14 PM   #3
Jason Karney
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Re: Final Fantasy X-Please rate this review

Good writing overall. I agree with Brad's comments.

Specifically, I recommend not using phrases like "So, why donít we chat about that first? " or "OK, so it might...". Stick with a first person, review format rather than a written monolog/conversation.

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