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Forum: Community User Submissions 01-29-2009, 10:29 PM
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Posted By Leizerbeam
Re: Osu! Tatakae! Ouendan! Review - Please Rate This Review

Thanks, David. I'm always down for some informed, funky, well-intentioned advice, so don't worry about it.
I'm really digging this community review scene, actually. Feedback, good vibe,...
Forum: Community User Submissions 01-27-2009, 10:59 PM
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Views: 2,090
Posted By Leizerbeam
Re: Osu! Tatakae! Ouendan! Review - Please Rate This Review

I fixed up that particular sentence using my own unique, stylized edit. In future, I'll have to intensify my editing process, it seems.
Forum: Community User Submissions 01-24-2009, 06:43 PM
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Posted By Leizerbeam
Re: Osu! Tatakae! Ouendan! Review - Please Rate This Review

Tweaked a few sentences here and there.

As for the 'whilst' thing, well, every tongue has preferred routes and I suppose mine just lead me to 'whilst' more often than not.
Forum: Community User Submissions 01-23-2009, 10:42 PM
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Posted By Leizerbeam
Re: Osu! Tatakae! Ouendan! Review - Please Rate This Review

Thanks for the comments, Tera and David, I can indeed see the occasional wordiness and grammar niggles. What are run-on sentences, though?
Forum: Community User Submissions 01-20-2009, 06:07 AM
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Posted By Leizerbeam
Osu! Tatakae! Ouendan! Review - Please Rate This Review

HIGH: Hearing my Japanese host mother comment 'kawaii!!' after I showed her a level of the game.
LOW: Almost doubling the amount of scratches on my touch-screen due to excessive and forceful...
Forum: The Art of Video Games 01-12-2009, 01:14 AM
Replies: 27
Views: 4,590
Posted By Leizerbeam
Re: How well-learned does a critic need be?

Whilst I do believe that a well-learned critic is generally more reliable and more experienced, I do not think a person's lack of experience with Street Fighter or Space Invaders etc. has any effect...
Forum: Community User Submissions 10-30-2008, 05:44 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 2,532
Posted By Leizerbeam
Re: Final Fantasy X-Please rate this review

Thanks, guys! I'm stoked to be on the main page:)
I'd very much like to do another review, so that I can see whether this one was a fluke. I was genuinely surprised to get such a positive reception!...
Forum: Community User Submissions 10-16-2008, 04:37 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 2,532
Posted By Leizerbeam
Re: Final Fantasy X-Please rate this review

Thanks for the feedback, guys.
Jason- Tell me if you thought this paragraph was ok with regards to what you were saying:

In the end, I did continue playing the game, despite my frustration. I...
Forum: Community User Submissions 10-14-2008, 08:25 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 2,532
Posted By Leizerbeam
Final Fantasy X-Please rate this review

FINAL FANTASY X REVIEW
How does the venerable series' first PS2 outing hold up today?

HIGH: The point in the story about 4/5s of the way through, wherein the characters all abandon their ...
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